Viona's tale part 1

This story is more focused on the mage faction but it still takes place in the same universe. Two twins with Warrior Journey

short introduction about Viona

Viona Vin Rose is a young sorcerer that try to seek the secret of Vesteria
she is very shy and will only talk to people she knows
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She used to have a sister named Carla Vin Rose but died from her right after she born
When she was in second grade a new kid named Tim Martinez got bullied alot and she tried to become friend with him, their friendship continues well even though sometimes Tim often tries to kill bullies but Viona still believes in Tim even though sometimes he is a bit too much but Viona never gets tired of advising Tim to always be a better person when Viona graduated from school
Viona found a new way of life by becoming a mage

When Alan left Tree of life Viona sitted and try to calm herself since she needs money for food and water and has no money. when she realized she that she was fell asleep she decides to talk with Tim since Kyle is busy cleaning his house and she can’t 100% trust Alan

Viona sees Tim train himself

Viona: You should take a break from that excessive training
Tim: I don’t care!
Viona: Also your body looks like you are getting anemia
Tim: It’s not anemia it’s just an effect from my training!
Viona: You should stop Tim you can’t just force yourself!
Tim: If I can’t force myself I will never ever break my current limit!
Viona: Tim you should stop doing a dark ritual!
Tim: No I won’t stop!

Tim try to focus on using dark ritual creating a big force that can be fealed by others and Tim body was shaky and look impaler

Viona: Tim you must stop!
Tim: I WON’T!

the force can feel by the other mages and they are trying to stop him!

Greybeard: Young Tim STOP forcing your BODY TO DO A THING THAT YOU CAN’T!
Tim: I DON’T CARE WITH YOUR WORD OLD MAN!
Warlock 1: TIM YOU MUST STOP OR YOU GOING LOSE YOUR LIFE!
Warlock 2: STOP DOING THIS!
Tim: WHY WOULD YOU CARE ABOUT ME?
Kyle: Tim just stop please just stop!
Tim: STOP CARING ME, NERD!

his dark ritual stopped and he then fell unconscious

Viona: Tim! don’t tell me you died!
Kyle: He’s alright but we just need to take care of him to the hospital
Viona: Please save him! I’m counting on you, Kyle!
Kyle: I will do what I can to save Tim!
Viona: please take a good care of him!
Kyle: I will Voina just be optimist okay?

Viona: okay…

Viona waited on Tim room waiting for him to wake up and praying to Vesra so he can be saved

To be continued!

note: this story is not canon to Vesteria and sorry for my grammar mistake

sorry if you don’t like the story I’m feeling kinda tired right now…

check their story too! @HardlyHarley and @Firebrowl

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Good story

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Good story indeed, also you might be getting regular soon (maybe)

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Wait do hospitals exists in Vesteria

yes, its called a cleric

Good story, but one problem.

In many RPGs, there are two ways to get rich:

  1. Be an adventurer
  2. Be an NPC shopkeeper

The issue with Tim’s ritual is that he didn’t cast Pillage Vitality on something (a Spider sounds suitable). Also, paling skin is a common trait of Warlocks worlds over, because their magic centers on using their life to gain MP, using that MP to regain that life, repeat. Pillage Vitality lvl 9, Simulacrum level 9, Dark Ritual level 2 (one point each from pillage and simulacrum, because otherwise it bothers me).

hospital=cleric
Tim ends up in a hospital
Tim ends up in a cleric
stonks

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No no no, Cleric = mobile hospital.

Tim wouldn’t go to a hospital, he’d just seek out the nearest Cleric.

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The Nearest Moving Hospital Mighty Sub
They Are The True Hospitals
#MightySubClub

They are the first aid kits
Noice pfp btw

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